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He’s just like all the other boys              She’s just like all the other girls
With black skinny jeans and                With her choppy black hair and
Shaggy blonde hair, nothing                  Colorful band T-Shirts, nothing
At all unique,  and I love it                    At all special, and I loathe it

The way he walks by, oh my                    The way she talks, dear God
And just every thing about                       And something is just so unreal
Him takes my breath away                       About her, my heart doesn’t beat
Not like I need it any way                        Not like I want it to anyway

Why does he have to be so                       God, why can’t I be like that, so
Perfect, so fucking perfect                       So flawless, so damn flawless
With a smile that kills, and                       With eyes that pierce souls, and
An aura that thrills, oh why                       Your heart I long to hold, oh why

Do you have to be exactly                         Do you have to be exactly
So fucking perfect                                      So damn flawless
In every way, every single day                   In every way, every single day
   
                              I think I love you, I know I love you
©2008-2009 ~Darkness1-2
:icondarkness1-2:

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I tried to do something new..Did I suceed? Hope you like.

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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
Yes, you did do something different, and I really like the result. This is a powerful poem and the format is unique. Kudos on a job well done :D

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Ignorance isn't bliss, it is the inability to distinguish the truth;
the unwillingness to change
And the dislike of something different.
:frail:
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
:iconlockedinsidemyhead00:
you did, you really did. :hug: its a powerful poem and the format is so..................unheard of. :shrugs: idk its awesome though.

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~upon a midnight rise, i feel like i am alone. with out you here by my side, i am nothing. doomed to this damn place that i am to remain, i wait for the fire to warm my heart... my Pyro~[link]
:iconsakura-chan41000031:
some of the words, like unreal, are they supposed to be fpr bth sides? try puting them in the middle. that might help a littl ^^ but i like it!

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L: is Yagami-kun there?
K: Speaking
L: Haha! I knew you were Kira!
K: holly muffin cakes O_O
...and thus kira was caught ^_^
:icondarkness1-2:
Thats what I was going for. thanks :hug:

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sweet lies and lullabys
:icondarkness1-2:
Thanks so much :hug:

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sweet lies and lullabys
:iconinnocencedied2nite:
You are ever so welcome :iconnewglomp: I love it when people step out of the box.

--
Ignorance isn't bliss, it is the inability to distinguish the truth;
the unwillingness to change
And the dislike of something different.
:frail:
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
:iconlockedinsidemyhead00:
No problem :hug:

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~upon a midnight rise, i feel like i am alone. with out you here by my side, i am nothing. doomed to this damn place that i am to remain, i wait for the fire to warm my heart... my Pyro~[link]
:icondarkness3-4:
It's you and Chris ain't it?!!! Yeah know what?!! You should put a picture of either cheesecake w/ (of course!!) whipped cream or just whipped cream!!!!!!!!! rofl!! That would be hilarious!!!!!!


And for those of you that don't know why it would be hilarious just ask =Darkness1-2 to explain not me!!!

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"When you sleep, your body marks the time. Yesterday dies in the dark; tomorrow wakes. Eyes open, you know. The body ages, the hourglass empties, death approaches, time is devoured but not lost."
Excerpt from "Skinned" by Robin Wasserman
:icondarkness1-2:
You can I'm not. But yeah its kinda me and chris. I wrote it last night. Pretty cool right?

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sweet lies and lullabys

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